TV assessment: Learner Response
1) Type up your feedback from your teacher in full (you do not need to write marks/grades if you do not wish to).
FBI:You need to work on applying audience theories to Q 1.3 -you are not fully responding to question.
Also Q2 is an essay and you are not addressing the statement in enough detail
2) Look at the mark scheme document linked above. Write an answer for question 1.1 on mise-en-scene.
The two children they are chasing – costume and make-up to make them look abandoned/homeless.
3) Look at question 1.2. Write ONE narrative feature in the extract you could have written for this answer.
I could have wrote about Barthes.
4) Now focus on question 1.3. Write down ONE answer for this question about how the extract targeted a family audience.
Personal relations- parents want to keep watching to see if the children survive in the abandoned city.
5) Finally, write down THREE things you need to revise or practice for your next Television assessment
-I need to revise for mise-en-men because i did not understand it properly
-i need to revise on questions like 1.3 because i believe i could have gotten 6 or 7 marks if i actually tried on that question.
-i need to start to put more information in the essay part .
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